KPI table, highlights, lowlights, asks. Under 800 words. 10 minutes with auto-pulled KPIs.
Write the subject line
Format: '[Company] · [Month] · [KPI movement]'. Example: 'Acme · March · ARR +18% MoM'. Updates with a KPI in the subject get 2.1x the open rate.
Lead with the headline number
First paragraph: the metric that matters most and a one-sentence narrative. 'ARR hit $2.4M (+18% MoM), driven by 6 enterprise closes including [name].'
Place asks in the top 25%
Specific names beat generic: 'Intro to Jane Doe at Acme' converts 6x better than 'intros to RevOps leaders'. Three asks max.
Include the KPI table
ARR, MoM growth, monthly burn, runway in months. Auto-pulled from Stripe and Mercury where possible.
Write 2-3 highlights
Concrete: hires, customer wins, product launches. Skip 'great quarter' platitudes.
Write 2 candid lowlights
Updates with lowlights get 47% more replies than highlights-only. Candor compounds trust.
Note hires and roles you're recruiting
Specific titles + locations. Many investors will share with their network.
Send to your list
Group by stage / fund / warmth. Send during recipient morning. Track read receipts.
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